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Lonely tears

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You are here
I am too
we're walking
side-to-side(all brand new)
and I still feel you
hugging me like you used to
and it never mattered when I tried
only mattered when I cried

but I can't stop these tears from falling
I know that my heart keeps calling
I really can't figure out what to do
but I realize that we're through.

You are gone
But I'll move on
we are through
but everything's still brand new
and I still see
you were meant for me
but I'll take the clue
that we are sadly through.

yet I can't stop these tears from falling
and I know that my heart keeps calling
I really can't figure out what to do
but I do really understand that we're through
me and you
we are through
so I say good bye
if only you saw me cry.
poem that's really part of a song I'm *trying* to write. I don't know why I keep trying to write song cause I'm no good at them, but just tell me what you think.
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angelic-jean's avatar
I have to say, I sang this song, really I did, instead of reading it, I sat and tried to work out the best way to sing it. I feel you should continue to write lyrics...I for one wouldnt mind praciticing on some unfamiliar chorus :) (Smile)

Crying Depression is incurable...accept for a hug...will you hug me? Crying