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Sometimes I feel like I've lost
that part of myself that clings to sunrises
with poetic verse dancing on the tip
of these tired and twisted fingers
eager to capture every breath that is lost
in the cracked light, breaking upon the morning sky.
There are many moments
that these eyes and this heart will never forget.
They are not big moments like other people's moments
full of white dresses, swirling moments, and kisses beneath the bedsheets.
But do not be mistaken,
there have been so many moments that have passed
where my heart has swollen,
pushing against the confines of these ribs.
My hands have held, soothed and hoped;
these hands have done all the talking
yet cannot translate to paper
the joy that it all brings.
If only they could talk
they would tell of late nights,
of paper cuts and coffee,
of gunshot wounds and car accidents.
They would explain the stifling nature
of the operating room,
gowned with two layers of latex,
removing organs and cancers.
The feel of cold metal instruments,
a dancing needle and thread
made to approximate the edges
of a human.
But how could I begin
to touch upon that first moment
I held a baby in my hands,
feeling the cold air fill
those tiny lungs for the first time.
Sometimes I feel like I've lost
that part of myself, that it slipped through the cracks
replaced by a whole new language
of human experiences.
But then the sunset hits the horizon
like a dance of words
tip toeing into my heart.
that part of myself that clings to sunrises
with poetic verse dancing on the tip
of these tired and twisted fingers
eager to capture every breath that is lost
in the cracked light, breaking upon the morning sky.
There are many moments
that these eyes and this heart will never forget.
They are not big moments like other people's moments
full of white dresses, swirling moments, and kisses beneath the bedsheets.
But do not be mistaken,
there have been so many moments that have passed
where my heart has swollen,
pushing against the confines of these ribs.
My hands have held, soothed and hoped;
these hands have done all the talking
yet cannot translate to paper
the joy that it all brings.
If only they could talk
they would tell of late nights,
of paper cuts and coffee,
of gunshot wounds and car accidents.
They would explain the stifling nature
of the operating room,
gowned with two layers of latex,
removing organs and cancers.
The feel of cold metal instruments,
a dancing needle and thread
made to approximate the edges
of a human.
But how could I begin
to touch upon that first moment
I held a baby in my hands,
feeling the cold air fill
those tiny lungs for the first time.
Sometimes I feel like I've lost
that part of myself, that it slipped through the cracks
replaced by a whole new language
of human experiences.
But then the sunset hits the horizon
like a dance of words
tip toeing into my heart.
Literature
Succumbing to Water
"Succumbing to Water"
A million snowflakes descending,
each one
different.
Which watery design
is your death?
Perhaps it is
the foamy monstrous walls
rising
rising
falling.
You're crushed by an ocean.
Or the river pulls and
you drift along.
Deaf ears don't hear
the resounding smash
of water
breaking like glass on deadly rocks.
Blind eyes refuse to see
the edge.
Maybe a drop of rain
touches you, tracing
a line on your face
and
you
Literature
water
i am not afraid of death.
i did not want
the boy beneath the apple trees,
or the cherry petals
in the orchard, touched with invisible fingers
leaving brown indentations, bruised
with your inflection even on the brink of spring
not the one littered under the sunlit twigs
grappling for heaven
But the one lying exactly center field
staring straight at the sky--
waiting for a crash of thunder
for the paper flowers, metaphor for holding
over the sills of everything transient,
and left for erasing-- like a soul brimming
over the bridge of an emotion
strong enough to overcome itself.
brave boy with a thousand faces-- i see
Literature
Water
(Your POV)
It’s like liking a wine. A pure, alluring, irritating, mindless and lovely glass of wine. You get in the habit of one- not one like a drug , but still one to take you pretty over the edge. It’s tasty, mindless and your lost like a love lost fool. You get over it eventually, like you would with a past love or crush. What you need, what you want and always did was… water. The only thing that can cure you, ease you and give your mind relief is a glass of water. Because water is pure, healthy. It does not deceive your mind like other juices and illustrious things. It lets your mind breathe, think and live- it lets
It's been a long year. Probably one of the longest I will ever have. There have been so many experiences that I could have never imagined, many that I haven't talked to many people about. This poem hopes to touch upon just a few of those moments. It was a rare moment when I felt inspired to write this year, something difficult to deal with when I used to write every day.
I hope that I can eventually put more down into words, but for now, this will have to suffice.
(preview image is of my trusty ears which I couldn't have survived this year without)
I hope that I can eventually put more down into words, but for now, this will have to suffice.
(preview image is of my trusty ears which I couldn't have survived this year without)
© 2011 - 2024 sanguru
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Sanguru what can I say.
You blend deep metaphors with realistic images, words and sentences that seem easy to imagine. Altogether, it paints a picture of a life. I hope you get to write more.
Sometimes I feel like I've lost
that part of myself, that it slipped through the cracks
replaced by a whole new language
of human experiences.
I loved these lines.
-DoomiT-
You blend deep metaphors with realistic images, words and sentences that seem easy to imagine. Altogether, it paints a picture of a life. I hope you get to write more.
Sometimes I feel like I've lost
that part of myself, that it slipped through the cracks
replaced by a whole new language
of human experiences.
I loved these lines.
-DoomiT-