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cycling seasons by `sanguru:iconsanguru:





the trees have been attacked
fall leaving fresh bruises
of red and brown and yellow.

they start to lose their hair
beautiful pain across the earth
illuminating the streets with color
and the spectacle of watching
something fall.

the winter comes
and they stand there naked
shivering in the wind
stripped of everything
but their ability to endure
and dance.

after winter, spring always comes
butterfly kisses upon
the healing earth.
we sprout green and beautiful
being cradled in the arms
of comfort and love and i'm sorrys.

the summer of heated arguments upon us
she looks down and cries.
we've been down this road before
we know where it goes.
to fall and fresh bruises
lost hair and spring wishes
that everything would just stop

if she could only leave him
perhaps the fall wouldn’t make her cry
but she is lost in the cycle of seasons
addicted to the love after the pain
and the hope of a brighter day.
©2005-2009 `sanguru
:iconsanguru:

Author's Comments

sometimes there is a metaphor so striking, so powerful that it changes the way you see the world completely.

i will never look at fall the same way. if you truely understand this poem, you wont either.

sometimes i cant help but feel this lost.

thanks to `2mo for always pushing me to write more,
and *Davenit because without the desire to show him this idea, i probably would have never written it.
want to help *Davenit? look here.


the preview image is mine, taken last year. dont steal it... :|

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:iconminniemae:
Whoa...*hugz*

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"Before we let euphoria convince us we are free...remind us how we used to feel before when life was real..."
:icondavenit:
I have no idea even where to begin. I'm going to need a few days to really take this one in. It's amazing. I could only wish to write something so wonderful...

I'll get back to you with more...

I'm glad I could help make you realize this piece. I am honored...

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:icondoomit:
It's same string of cheese I keep eating and I can never finish.
Very well done. Heh.

-doomit

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:iconc3ph31d:
i think autumn and winter are the two best seasons. great read and a very nice photo! :hug:

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:iconladyr:
I don't know that I really understand the being behind this poem. But when I read it I can't help but think of Leukemia. I read through the comments and noone else really seemed to tell you what they thought the meaning behind the poem, so I thought I'd telly ou what came to my head. It was the bruised and loss of hair I think. It made me sad.

I love spring and autumn.. they are quite possibly my favorite seasons. I think of spring as new.. being reborn and I think of fall as the old preparing to die... or that time right before you go to sleep at night. I dunno.. but I don't think anything will ever truly change how I see the fall time..

<3

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"The heart has reasons that Reason knows not." -Pascal

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:iconsanguru:
it's about an abusive relationship

but i love the way you interpreted it :heart:
:iconladyr:
:aww:

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"I miss boobies. I mean. I miss a lot of things about being in a relationship, but thanks to you, I'm thinking about boobs :roll:" -blackice
:iconcoolmarvin:
Wow..very powerful writing!

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