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Literature Text

humble promises were made
just like blooming passion
(start before
(light desire))
yet we could not
make our lips meet.

as if we thought
rules could be broken
(painful tears
(falling ice))
making love through fingers
premature dance of innocence.

pausing for a minute
reflection before shooting sadness
(lost hope
(lovely tears))
maybe lacking kisses hurt
more then lacking love.
experimentation. back to this, finally. my writer's block is finally going away... maybe it's that i'm finally feeling emotions again, maybe it's finally just ending. i dunno, but i'm happy it's leaving me alone =)
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read it everyway you can. you'll see something new almost every time =)
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doomit's avatar
It's cool
I love the way that the poem tells of love that is felt and yet not felt at all. Really a strange feeling to love someone that you haven't even met yet. I figure its dangerous
and yet that might be the fun of it.

-doomit