literature

maria my oh

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maria saw images blur softly
lost in a steal cage of tears
at least she could remember
what to feel
as fingernails pierce desire
killing only fright.

maria where have you gone
pain too intense?
not like we could blame
you crumble too much.

maria claimed that steel slashed
murder these dreams
rivers of red moons fly
stabbing me
deeper we go
get rid of pain at the root.

maria did i see you
crying moonlight?
not like we could complain
you fall too much.

maria claimed the moon rose for her
rain falls with her
wet hair sticking
nose, teeth, chin
small features disappearing
red sun sets.

maria are you still living
crying in a corner?
not like we would understand
you're red death/life.
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same basis at that poem up there. i still hate her, why did she have to do it to them? so many in pain....
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tired, depressed, lonely. don't ask me. i'm to annoyed to explain anything anymore.
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frankienexus's avatar
the link wouldnt work so i had to take this poem on its own merits totally, and in a way it freed it off personal emotion and i was able to conquer up my own mental images gained from your words.
its flow and sleekness makes me think of a onec horrod person , now defeated, half of what she is lost in the night, which softens her somewhat,
but the picture, no matter how seemingly romantic hides a solid harsh steel edge