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rose-to rose

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You were the pain born deep inside
He was the gun, his mom tried to hide
I was the angel who took him far away
cursed and fallen I now lay
another rose petal upon his grave.

rose-to-rose
it never meant to happen this way
if he had only listened
to the tears of grace...

You were the saint crying for his soul
He was the grave-digger, hollow and alone
I was the girlfriend leaving him behind
killed by a mother
who carries roses and cries.

rose-to-rose
it never meant to happen this way
if he had only listened
to the tears of grace...

You were the bitch sleeping in his bed
He was the voice talking inside his head
I was the reason she decided to leave
a misunderstanding you must believe
for roses only make those weak, bleed.

rose-to-rose
it never meant to happen this way
if he had only listened
to the tears of grace...
i've been trying to write with a sort of rhythm lately but haven't been too successful... this is one of my latest experiments with poetry, hope to be doing more of the sort with it later...

it tells a story in sort of a cryptic manner based on pronouns and the relationship between certain things...
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ILikeTheDark's avatar
wow the first and second stanza's are perfect.

your truely amazing